Unless you're a cat or owl, the little details are based in larger forms. Everything blurry edges. Visual acuity of reason falls at night is because the focus of the vision which we see small detail is filled with photoreceptors that only work best in bright light.
If you are using night photography as a reference, remember that the camera does not see that the eye is, and you need to do this if you want to suggest human vision.
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